What is Les's criticism of the King James Version in Acts 11:20?
The criticism is that Acts 11:20 is one place where the King James Version is not exactly perfect. The context records this remark immediately after noting the men from Cyprus and Cyrene preached the Lord Jesus to the Grecians at Antioch.
Les explains that in Acts 11:20, after describing scattered believers, including men of Cyprus and Cyrene, who came to Antioch and spake unto the Grecians, preaching the Lord Jesus, he says he will probably raise the ire of some, but he thinks this is one place where the King James isn't exactly perfect. The supplied context stops there and does not spell out the precise wording correction he has in mind.
And some of them were men of Cyprus and Cyrene, which, when they were come to Antioch, spake unto the Grecians, preaching the LORD Jesus.